There does appear to be some OR problems. There are editors available for assistance with Project Film that can help. The overall prose in general is very poor and may require additional editor input to pass GA. Some sources have described the film as a remake of First Man into Space." Also the same problem of over use of the title of the film itself to closely together. " The Incredible Melting Man has a very similar plot to that of First Man into Space (1959), which is also about an astronaut who turns into a hideous monster after an accident in space. " West comes across a fisherman in the woods and kills him, ripping off his head and throwing it into a stream, where it eventually falls down a waterfall and cracks open in a bloody mess" That could be much simlified as well as the entire section. The prose within the "Plot" section contain unnecessary descriptions that do not provide plot develoment and seem to have been added for sheer impact. There are some spacing problems in the prose that need to be corrected. The production section is fine with the mention as written but the this is not needed in the lede. " The gory make-up effects were designed by artist Rick Baker". If he had not yet received accolades from the Academy at this time, is it notable enough for mention here? Also, how was the make up noted for goriness? The sentence should be simplified. " Future Academy Award winning make-up artist Rick Baker provided the make-up effects for the film, which were noted for their goriness" That seems to editorialize. " He must consume human flesh in order to survive, and his strength and fury only grow as his murderous rampage continues". Some of the prose does not read well and contain puffery or weasel words and does not comply with MoS. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?Ī. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Is it factually accurate and verifiable?. In order to pass a GA nomination the article must meet the following standards: I will begin review shortly.- Amadscientist ( talk) 06:42, 4 March 2011 (UTC) Reply Reviewer: Amadscientist ( talk) 06:42, 4 March 2011 (UTC) The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:The Incredible Melting Man/GA1. Thank you.īetacommandBot ( talk) 04:14, 2 January 2008 (UTC) Reply If you have any questions please ask them at the Media copyright questions page. 
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